Justice Scalia on Good Writing
Sunday, October 16, 2011 at 11:53AM 
Justice Scalia recently gave writing and oral argument tips to the Richmond Virginia Bar. Check out this article from the Richmond Times-Dispatch for the details. But here's a snippet to whet your appetite:
Back to the effective use of English, Scalia advised not to use banal legalese. "The test is, if you talk that way at a cocktail party, would people look at you funny? And they would if you used … 'aforesaid' and all of that garbage." Among his pet peeves are phrases such as " 'fatally flawed.' Nothing is 'wrong' anymore. Nothing is 'flawed.' It is always 'fatally flawed.' Get rid of it. It's hackneyed."
It also isn't a good idea to use "empower" or "impact" as verbs around Scalia.
Other tips include:
"Don't be playing on heartstrings. Don't give a jury argument to a judge because if he's a good judge, he is not swayed by emotion and if he is a bad judge who is swayed by emotions, he doesn't want to look like a bad judge," he said. "Reason is paramount."
"Be scrupulously accurate." Judges on appeals court presume you know more about the case being argued than they do. "Once it appears to me that you know less about the case than I do, you have lost a whole lot," he warned. That happens, he said, if you are inaccurate or exaggerate.
In oral arguments, make your big point first. "Why? Because you may never get off it," he said. "In my court, where you go depends on the questions you get and you may get so many questions on your first point, which is not your major point, you never get to your big point. You don't want that to happen."
The manner of your presentation is important. "I want a respectful manner, but neither an obsequiousness manner nor — this is even worse — a professorial manner," Scalia said. "If you're a good lawyer, speak like a good lawyer."
Read the whole thing.
